paulgroth1130's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Demon conscience]

cool idea

the background is hurting my eyes, and the demon's feet dont match the aesthic of the rest of the image.

Torm responds:

You have sensitive eyes boy! Maybe I should improve the legs but I would keep them as fire, it's a demon and so could even have toilet brush legs if I wanted it too. Cheers for the comment though.

[You-v-me logo]

cool

thats a great idea. I would probably make the teeth with letters bigger and take out the color fade on the lips. It will look mor crisp and be easier to print on to things like tshirts later. Great idea.

Torm responds:

Actually there is an original without the gradient effects but I thought this was better, I prefer the subtlety of the text. It was originally a t-shirt design but never went to print so I wanted to improve it for myself. Cheers though.

[B-B-B-Ben Stein]

Not too bad

Ben Stein was not my first impression of this. I would say that using his unique nose as the focal point would have been a little better, also i would say to put a little more variation in your lines. That will give it a better stylized look.

Daverom responds:

Yeah I kinda slacked on varying the line thickness