paulgroth1130's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Falling]

very nice

i love pen work, good job.

[Wannuh B Uh Blmpp]

what pokemon is that.

very cute. very finished work great job.

Tootmania responds:

Thanks! And no, it is not a pokemon! His name is Gassichu!

Nothing like Pokemanz at all...

[Marshmellow]

cool

nice perspective work. Still is rough tho. tighten it up and post the finished piece

[Demon conscience]

cool idea

the background is hurting my eyes, and the demon's feet dont match the aesthic of the rest of the image.

Torm responds:

You have sensitive eyes boy! Maybe I should improve the legs but I would keep them as fire, it's a demon and so could even have toilet brush legs if I wanted it too. Cheers for the comment though.

[You-v-me logo]

cool

thats a great idea. I would probably make the teeth with letters bigger and take out the color fade on the lips. It will look mor crisp and be easier to print on to things like tshirts later. Great idea.

Torm responds:

Actually there is an original without the gradient effects but I thought this was better, I prefer the subtlety of the text. It was originally a t-shirt design but never went to print so I wanted to improve it for myself. Cheers though.

[New Profile Picture]

nice line work

your coloring job is top notch as well.

[Aware]

good work

hands are too small and the head is a wee bit big. Your shading is spot on and they look very natural. adding the figures shadow really gives it more weight. Good JOB!

[I am the spy]

good start

the best advice i can give anyone who wants to learn how to draw people would be to practice by tracing them. Thats a good way to learn anatomy and stuff. Then you will have a lot of reference in your brain as to what a figure should look like.