paulgroth1130's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Woman with Flowers]

good

its good you see the flaws, that means your a good artist. biggest thing is the proportions of the body. also the fabric doesnt look right,

IloveNantes responds:

Yeah, it does look a bit fucked up.

[The Rythm Kicks In]

good work

the figure is not in the right perspective. it looks pretty contorted. and the head is way off. You can add more contrast by cross hatching more tho!

Safst3r responds:

Thanks, I'll take what you said about the shading in mind. Although I'm confused about what you mean by the perspective, if you have the time could you please PM me as regards to this? It would help alot :) Thanks.

[Krystle's Kitchen illustration]

sweet

bottom hand need work and head might be a little too big. nice rendering tho!

Renegade-Hamster responds:

It's a caricature, so that's why the head is big.

I agree with the bottom hand. I was working from a photo, but the middle, ring, and pinky fingers were cut off the bottom, so I had to invent them. Not really sure it works as well as I hoped.

[Sugar Hill]

colors?

These colors just bug me. it makes my eyes bug out!!!

JWBalsley responds:

h ha, yeah, they are very bright!

Cheers!

[The Restricted Area]

looks good

you should try to saturate the colors a bit more. Great job

MikeyCoy responds:

I'll try to fix that up, then. lol, why didn't I think of that earlier?

[Pin Up Model]

nice start

This is a good start. Yeah first thing is the floating head. Also i would work on the figure, it needs a lot of work. the best way i can help you is to say keep practicing.

amyrenee responds:

Thanks! I'll keep practising, don't worry I will keep getting better! :D

[The Birds Nest]

looks pretty good.

This must be for a game level right. sorry too impatient for ur website.

simonoc responds:

Yeah you can walk around the level in a game engine but there is no combat just puzzles and stuff to look at and explore. I plan to release it in a couple of weeks time.

[Bionica]

sweet

i totally thought mass effect. nice textured look on the face. what did you use to make this?

zigan responds:

Photoshop CS4 and a Wacom Intuos 3 tablet. :)

[Sephiroth]

great job

did you do this off of reference?

Erion90 responds:

If for reference you mean that i helped myself with a pictures, yes.. Anyway thanks.

[Wannuh B Uh Blmpp]

what pokemon is that.

very cute. very finished work great job.

Tootmania responds:

Thanks! And no, it is not a pokemon! His name is Gassichu!

Nothing like Pokemanz at all...